Two Lunes and One Haiku

By Oliver | Published: July 16, 2010

A lune is an english language version of the haiku, invented by Robert Kelly (http://ezinearticles.com/?The-Lune:-The-English-Language-Haiku&id=645398). It has a 5-3-5 syllable structure.

1)
My cock, a buffoon’s
dowsing rod,
dipping towards your source.

2)
Ragged-eared tomcat
mewing for
wet pussy dinner.

A standard 5-7-5 syllable haiku:

Black lashes so long
they brush my chest ten feet down
the cafe counter.

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